All Comments on 'Listening In'

Good story - I enjoyed this. Keep up with more submissions please! And it was so refreshing to read a story actually written in "English"!

I thoroughly enjoyed the story and would love a sequel to see if Mark had figured out how he might become the one to satisfy the voracious Janice.

An excellent start Beastie. I like your unashamed use of Scots idiom, though some readers may be unaware of it. Keep at it please, you'll get even better in time.

Well done on a readable, well written and witty piece. The nom de plume is a master'stroke' and I especially loved the English phrases dotted throughout such as 'Jammy, Jammy sod'. The hint of humour at the end with the oversight as to the taping was an added bonus. ;-)

Very nice start ... I cant wait to see if there is more from this trio.

Thanks for an excellent read!