by kromen
I liked it. It flowed well in most places and you bought the erotica of the piece to life. It was a little difficult to follow at the beginning, but it was definitely worth the read. Thanks for sharing.
What was absent--background, character developement--was more than made up for in depth. A few little errors but not enough to be distracting. Very nicely done. Without anything to go on but the actions of one character I could imagine a very deep love.