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'Star Bound' Ch. 02

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by Anonymous09/01/09

Looking for Space Adventure in all the wrong...

...play-says. I was looking for the phrase "spacesuit" when I found your first chapter and then continued reading out of curiosity. This one is A tiny bit too aggressive for me, but I understand 'different strokes, for different folks' as the saying goes. I am interested in seeing WHAT plans Ani has in store for the last "member" of the Athor line and hope you will add another chapter where she (ultimately) gains control over him! ~ Wait is that being to predictable or formulaic?

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by Anonymous10/23/10

I love this story

I wish you would continue this story Ive stumbled upon it two times and you have a great beggining to it.

Your a talented writer so I will check back soon :D

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by Anonymous08/25/13

L2S

Grammar too...

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