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Her First Time

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by barepusslover11/01/09

Hot!!

Sweet!! Left me hot and bothered! Look foward to additional chapters and stories. Thank you.

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by Anonymous11/01/09

annoyed at the opening

Please find someone to edit your work. The misspelled words and typos left me hot and bothered, but for all of the wrong reasons.

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by Anonymous11/02/09

It isn't necessary

To have "perky" breasts or a 9 inch dork to describe an erotic event. Your feelings count. Tell us about them. Also, just because everybody seems to work anal sex into every story doesn't mean it's the norm. You can bet that not one woman in a hundred will ask for it the first time.

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by Anonymous12/31/09

Hells Yeah

Great story. Not only erotic but has a powerful command of the English language (I didn't see any of the typos mentioned...)Keep up the good work!

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