All Comments on 'Eden's Nightmare Ch. 02'

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W_O_G over 14 years ago

Well Done!

I held my breath throughout most of the chapter. Your imagery is vivid. Sometimes the tease is hotter than raw sex. I eagerly anticipate Eden's choice and Gunther's execution.

Anonymousover 14 years ago

I like the dynamic developing

Between Eden and the Priest. You make them seem very real, unlike many stories I read here. The slowly way he disrobed her was very nice. Looking forward to part 3.

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