by Alfamann
So, Kym has finally given in to her sluttiness by blowing the three guys...nice! That hike up when she's naked was a hot intro!
The pace of these stories was slowly building, then within 3 short paragraphs she'd blown three guys!
Way too rushed, especially as the previous stories made even the simplest acts extremely erotic
When you resorted to outright sex instead of humiliation and punishment this immediately became my least favorite chapter so far. You have a great talent for coming up with ideas for exquisitely embarrassing your protagonist - something that is hard to find these days. Resorting to such wanton plain old sex is so common it is not worthy of you as there are thousands and thousands of sex stories here. Embarrassment is hard to find, I would encourage you to stick with what you do best and forget the gutter sex in your stories.