by Czyswt1
Great start! Already love the characters and the storyline. (Maybe a bit longer though) I will be looking for the next part, please dont let us wait to long!
Love building between two friends is a theme I enjoy reading! I'm interested in knowing where the story is going...
I like where this story is going.
They both have feelings for each other, but are afraid to let each other know how they feel
I hope that they don't take long to be honest to each other.
so far so good im excited to see what happens next =) hurry up with the next chapter!! :P
I really hope you continue. I am feeling this story. Great start.
really great start, keep going I am looking forward to next chapter.
except for a few differences, this reads just like my relationship with my best friend.
Hey, this was a good beginning, but don't stop there!!!
Nyeesha
This needs to be lengthened in order for it to have justice done to it. Get it cracking and finish this story :>)
I know I've made people wait way too long for the rest of this story. A lot of stuff has happened since I have posted this first chapter, but I am about to have a break and start back writing on it again. I have it all in my head, I just have to get it typed out and submitted. So, hopefully, in the next couple of weeks, I'll start posting some more chapters and going from there.
I guess I am impatiently waiting for more :-)