All Comments on 'The Thorns'

you should write more chapters to this story.... i would like to see where and how Kirkos and Telendra would carry on and continue. Perhaps he will take her back to his hut?? :)

A lovely piece; very enjoyable, and very well-written.

Thank you.

This is a wonderful start, there should be more chapters! Her not having a home, and then meeting up with him.....it's be great.

I'm normally not fond of this style of writing - just not my thing - but this was wonderful.

Very well written! A sequal would be nice... :-D

One question though: Did his cock punch through her cervix, or how did they manage that?