All Comments on 'Until Nathan Found Her'

Everything was going along swimmingly until the second to last sentence.

"Irregardless" doesn't belong!!! Get a dictionary.

Thank you for the feedback- I'll see if I can fix that (not sure how, but I'll try!). It's actually nice to know that until that gaffe, the story was appreciated :)

Waiting for more. That was a great start

Where's the rest of the story????

what a waste of time