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by Anonymous05/25/10

Interesting Premise

Everything was going along swimmingly until the second to last sentence.

"Irregardless" doesn't belong!!! Get a dictionary.

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by sea21705/26/10

Thanks for the feedback!

Thank you for the feedback- I'll see if I can fix that (not sure how, but I'll try!). It's actually nice to know that until that gaffe, the story was appreciated :)

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by Anonymous07/27/11

waiting

Waiting for more. That was a great start

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