Everything was going along swimmingly until the second to last sentence.
"Irregardless" doesn't belong!!! Get a dictionary.
Thank you for the feedback- I'll see if I can fix that (not sure how, but I'll try!). It's actually nice to know that until that gaffe, the story was appreciated :)
Waiting for more. That was a great start
Where's the rest of the story????
what a waste of time
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