For erotica it is better than average but, for my taste, not the best.
Usually in the 'cop screws my Sweetie' tales, someone has committed a minor crime, like speeding. Not in this one, which removes a layer of coercion! There are some unnecessary aspects to the story which reduce the 'what may happen? Will she or won't she?' tension! Flashing the paperboy is one of these!
The sex was fairly bland and sparsely described ... Geez!
I DOUBT YOU EVER HAD A WOMAN IN YOU LIFE OTHER THAN A MOTHER OR SISTER. YOU THINK THIS STINKY PILE OF SHIT IS A FANTASY, ONLY IN YOUR FUCKED UP MIND. QUIT POSTING ASSCRACK.
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