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The Officer and The Naked Girl

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by Anonymous

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by theravenfox06/22/10

To The Anonymous Person Who Wished Me Luck In The Contest

I thank you for your well wishes and I'm sorry that your computer won't allow you to listen to audio stories. However, since the vast majority of your comment was a diatribe on OTHER people in the Nude Day Contest, I won't allow it to stay on my story. I have removed your comment and will remove any further that disparage my competitors in this contest. I intend to play fair. Please respect that. Thank you.

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by Anonymous06/22/10

i loved your audio

raven that was a very well done audio. i just wish you could do this type of thing more often here on literotica.the other chick's voice was pretty hot!
again, wish you could do this sort of thing more often cuz it made my day.thank you!

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by Anonymous06/22/10

Wow!

Yet another impressive audio from the aural sex goddess. Five stars from me, babygirl. I liked the story and loved the sound of you cumming for your girl. She sounded hot too! Your lover wanttobe, Frankie

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by BiBigirl06/22/10

Awesome

This audio and story is AWESOME, Ravenfox. TYVM

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by Dawns06/22/10

MM

great lesbian love scene. It made me wet just listening,

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by D_K_Moon06/22/10

Wow!

That was a good story, and a very hot audio! I loved what you did with this one! Congratulations and good luck. Hopefully we'll see more audio entries in contests. I would like to see an audio contest as well. Thanks RavenFox for 21 minutes of heaven!

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Very nice job raven

Very nicely done.... Good luck in the contest.

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by driphoney06/23/10

Really Hot!

And really well done! Honestly, you could teach the pros doing audio books a thing or two. Good luck in the contest.

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by Anonymous06/23/10

Wow Raven you did it Again!

Wow that story was sooooo hot and sweet and sexy I came soo much hearing you and that sweeet little girl medow cuming.I hope you win the contest and what was the name of that girl who played medow you so should do more stories with her the sweetness of her voice and the smokey seductive tone of your voice is a sexy and naughty combination.I hope to hear more from you.Your number 1 Fan Aaron :).

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by drgonzo197906/23/10

Wow!

The "radio play" aspect of this (that's the closest I can think of for how you did this) is phenomenal! Definitely one of my new favorites (as almost all of your stories are now). You have my vote!

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by Anonymous06/24/10

Awesome

Just awesome. You really made my night. Keep making more. I loved how you incorporated each character's thoughts and speech and the smoochie sounds. Way cool. Loved it totally. I came so hard, my whole room is flooded with my tadpoles. Hahaha.

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by litfan1006/24/10

Wow

How you both made your voices fit the concepts of the characters plus how incredibly well the differences in tonality of your voices played together made this the most incredible audio I have ever heard. It was so well crafted. Having a killer story to go with it just completed an amazing package. Fantastic job. You deserve to win this contest.

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by Anonymous06/24/10

+1 compliment

The commenters above got there first, but I agree. Great, fun concept. Really nice voice acting. Sexy blend of cute and husky voices.

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by MrWarMage06/26/10

Clever clever...

I see what you did there... Ain't technology grand? *grins cos he's pretty sure he knows who the other voice actress is*

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by Cuchulain06/28/10

Fan-freaking-tastic!!

I loved the dialogue you had going between the characters (your voice for both slightly altered?). Beautifully written and performed! More like this please!

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by Anonymous06/30/10

AMAZING

Wow girl that was amazing i and stil throbing from fingering myself til climax... U shud say cunt mroe and wat wuda sent it over the top was if Officer and Meadow borught their pussies together and scissor fucked eachother bringing their love juice together. But God it was good enuff to have me gushing from my slit!!! FINALLY some LEsbian Audio!!! FINALLY

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by Anonymous07/06/10

Just me

How I would have loved to be a bird

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by Boxlicker10107/07/10

Really great

This was really hot, and a great story in every way. This is the way an audible story should be, with sound effects - if that's what they were - and two different voices blending together.

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by FredBartholomus07/07/10

Still trying to get through it!

I went ahead and voted even though I still haven't been able to get through the entire story. You can guess why!

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by Anonymous07/09/10

amazing. the two voice thing was fuckin beautiful. plz keep more of the same cumming!

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by Jaymal07/11/10

Boundary-Breaking and Super-hot

Loved this, Ravenfox - the voices complimented each other perfectly. You were a deliciously ravenous (no pun intended) Officer O'Reilly and where oh where did you find Meadow? I attempted making breakfast while listening - as foolish a piece of multi-tasking as I have ever attempted. A highly erotic and technically impressive audio-story/drama. Pursue the experiment, please...

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by Anonymous07/15/10

Sweet and hot

A joyful, fun story. Innocence and sexiness, with great voices and good production
Oh, and as hot as anything I've ever heard on Literotica. Sequel, sequel! Brava.

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by Anonymous02/10/11

I think this is one of your best yet. Everything about this one got me hot and bothered. Love to have another story with this guest girl, she sounded so cute and innocent. If you do plan on teaming up with her again I would love to have some playful yet erotic tickling included.

Just an idea.

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by Anonymous12/03/11

Bloody brilliant.

I have a weird fetish, I listen to these audio's on the bus or the train on the way to meetings.
And may I say when a cute little red head asked what I was listening to, I may have had sex in the toilets with said red head.

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by cutiejem1236701/30/12

omg wow

wow, i this is the best one iv heard yet! got me really excited and turned on xx

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by Sassykitten8111/18/12

Damnn that was good...cant wait to listen to some more!!

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by DickyUK12/10/12

Awesome!

Simply the best girl-girl audio I've ever heard! Great scenario, perfectly cast and brilliantly played out by two very sexy women who both cum so sweetly mmmm.

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by RamageRainbow06/06/13

Best audio author ever

I love all of Raven's stories, nothing makes me hotter :) Thank you Raven :D

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by Anonymous03/25/14

Sequel please!

Of all your wonderful audio stories this is still my favourite and is probably one of my favourite stories of all time on this site. I never make it to the end of the audio without exploding in my underpants. Please make a sequel to this you naughty lady!

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by mydirtymind10008/11/14

More, More, More!!!

You always make me cum, please continue this. You paint such a beautiful sexy word-orgasmic story. XOXO

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