All Comments on 'The Bet'

Kelly is a very cool character. Easy to love. Your descriptions were very playful and fun - the paragraph when they got home and stripped - I was dying. Hopping kangaroos sheesh. Fun, I look forward to more. Nice job.

Thanks for helping a brother out with some positive feedback.

This was a very fun story to write, so I'm glad the playful tone came through as designed.

Great story and time of discovery!!

The story was very easy to follow. Great writing by the way. Made me almost have an accident. Had to use the bathroom. Bravo!!

Thanks for the feedback Jenna. Feel free to contact me here if you have any ideas for other stories. I just posted a new one you may like called "Stuck in the elevator with Steph"

That was a damn hot story... I loved his "accidental" spurts the most. I love it when a guy starts to lose it.

Congratulations on such a marvellous story peebudy.

Very well worded and great plot. Glad you wrote this and I am looking forward to reading all your other submissions.

Thanks. -x-

Brought back some fond memories.

Good story. Made me think fondly of my college days!

I loved the part where you stood behind her, reached around, then spread her lips while she peed...so hit...