by Chiara23
A lovely story with a GREAT ending.
You write well. I hope we hear from you often.
js
i liked it and agree great outcome to a friendship :) your a great writer only thing i'd say is add in a little more detail i don't mind it the way you write it but stories can be way better if longer imo :)
you are a very good writer. I love your realistic portrayal of kids losing their virginity.
thanx
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