All Comments on 'Esperanza Ch. 01'

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tarnished_knight over 13 years ago

A very nice

beginning. Well written with a believable story line. I'll look for more.

grunabona over 13 years ago

*****

Nice start. Five stars.

fairlyagilex over 13 years ago

Looking foreword ..

To more! 5 stars

Anonymousover 13 years ago

As said- good start

It is a very nice beginning to a potentially great story. Yes, Miss Esperanza, you are a good erotica writer. We look forward to much more. Thank you!

Marbles29 over 13 years ago

i love it

I cant wait for updates on this. i have a feeling this is going to be a great story

Saturn_Rings over 13 years ago

Serving it Up Well

Looks like someone is working on dropping one hell of a tantalizing story on us. Wonder if Ronnie....oops Esperanza is going to be able to handle Mike's veterans savvy. And will Taylor ever find out....

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

Great start!

I agree with marbles29. This great beginning does have the potential to develop into a fabulous Interracial Romance. Looking forward to more from you and soon please!

RanDog025 about 1 year ago

Would have given a good score had it not been for the dot dot dots, one of the worst bad habits a Writer can obtain. So you read a few stories on Literotica and then, "Hey, I can write too!" But "NO" you need to pass a few classes in English Lit. first

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