by stryker53
Good one.
But seriously, your ability to relate your story is good, you just have little grammer mistakes like the your/you're problem. It's hard to proof your own story; the eye 'sees' what should be there, not what is. Believe me, I know. Anon could have been nicer. While this isn't a fetish of mine, I did enjoy the story with the aunt and nephew, and this one.