All Comments on 'Full Moon'

i like the idea of this poem. i think i'd tweak it a bit... use different turns of phrase to make it more poetic. but then, perhaps the differences in:

ten p.m.,

10:02

(either 10:00 and 10:02 or, ten p.m. and ten o two p.m.)

and

tugging at the heart strings of man,

and women

(either man and woman or, men and women)

are poetically quirky in their own right.

does not HOWL, i.e. if you take the stock image, don't run it though the same way. A4

...prose than poetry but some interesting directions. Just a teeny bit cliche'd.

Tess