by AlianaRoscoe
The story had lots of potential, but was confusing in many ways probably to due to it being rushed. It would have been nice to understand why the young lady had to approach the dragon in the first place. When reading the sexual part of the story I felt sorry for the women because i think this dragon is going to killer her. You gave no detail as the dimension of the dragon. This should not be a hit and quit it story.
It was a cute story. I'd have loved to see it be longer with more description of the dragon and the girl, etc. I'd have loved to see it made into a longer story. Other than that it was a sweet story.
The story lne is really good, but if you were to slow to the pace of the story down you could make it more interesting. Overall good story, could you possibly make a second chapter were another dragon-human appears and trys to steal the fair maddian away; then you could have a vicious fight and another sexul encounter. Well done
What the hell do they want, Dostoyevski or something? It's erotica FFS. Tease, pursuit, tongue, breasts, puss, woman climaxing unselfconsciously, and a promise of more to follow. Personally, I'm satisfied.
(If there were anal play too, I'd be delighted.)
5 stars, and a hearty thank you.