All Comments on 'Please Cowboy? Ch. 04'

Can't wait for the next chapter....

Too short, i was really getting into this chapter.

flat out dirty to have a cliffhanger right there, grrrr update soon please.

A clif hanger is so not right. Please let there be an update tomorrow.

My heart actually hurts. Please update this soon!

this is really interesting so far. However going into the chapter five I still don't know much about either lily or Scott. I think it's time we got a little character development. Also, although your story is fascinating, minor spelling mistakes that come up in ever other sentence are really distracting.your doing a great job, honestly, but some improvements would make this really fantastic period.

Please update soon. I check in everyday hoping that you've posted.

I submitted the next chapter three days ago so it should be up soon!!!!

Do you mean where she drugged, kidnapped, assaulted, sexually molested and raped him?

I don't mind your story it has been quite hot but it's hard to care what happens to these paper thin characters who are really unlikable.

This chapter was also far too short and you still make too many simple mistakes.

Serves him right but she is just as cowardly