It doesn't hold together for me, but there's too much good in it not to give it a five.
Nothing else to say.
i love it
This fit into the story so perfectly. I imagine you wrote it specifically for that purpose? It could also stand alone, though....
Keep up the good work!
And I will give full credit but I want to read this with my wedding vows, not that I'm gettin married anytime soon lol. I shed a tear for its beauty.
Firstly: thanks for the votes and kind words.
Next: Shire, the poem is all yours for your future wedding, lol - I'll be there in spirit.
And, lastly: Yes, this poem was written to go with the story, "I Know What I'm Doing" - but also intended to work as a stand-alone. I'm no poet, but I am an emotional being and hope that, at the very least, that came through. Again, thank you.
wow, that was just beautiful and emotional. i hope i know a love like that someday.
This poem is beautiful.
I don't even know what to say, except that it is marvelously incredible.
You may claim not to be a poet, but the words speak for themselves.
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