All Comments on 'I Know'

by AzanianHeat

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

It doesn't hold together for me, but there's too much good in it not to give it a five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Beautiful

Nothing else to say.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Beautiful!

This fit into the story so perfectly. I imagine you wrote it specifically for that purpose? It could also stand alone, though....

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
i hope you dont mind

And I will give full credit but I want to read this with my wedding vows, not that I'm gettin married anytime soon lol. I shed a tear for its beauty.

Shire

AzanianHeatAzanianHeatabout 12 years agoAuthor
Thank You

Firstly: thanks for the votes and kind words.

Next: Shire, the poem is all yours for your future wedding, lol - I'll be there in spirit.

And, lastly: Yes, this poem was written to go with the story, "I Know What I'm Doing" - but also intended to work as a stand-alone. I'm no poet, but I am an emotional being and hope that, at the very least, that came through. Again, thank you.

Blessings,

AH

canndcanndabout 12 years ago

wow, that was just beautiful and emotional. i hope i know a love like that someday.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
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This poem is beautiful.

I don't even know what to say, except that it is marvelously incredible.

You may claim not to be a poet, but the words speak for themselves.

Net Mooi

shirohshirohalmost 9 years ago

beautiful. just beautiful. is complicated to enjoy another language, and even more in a poem, but I really like it.

I just finished reading I know what I'm doing, and I was so happy about to share the seasons (you know, that thing of snow in christmas doesn't work in this part of the planet, here we eat watermellon and go to the beach instead). that was a very good story, so tender, and the plot was interesting, all I wanted to know was More, more, more. Love the weird pair of Js that speak in half sentences that the other finishes!!!

congratulations, your work is very good. keep writting, please.

greetings from Chile.

AsymbiiAsymbiiover 8 years ago
Loved it!!!

I loved the poem so much that I am hoping that you will let me use it in my wedding as part of my vows. If not I will understand, but a love that is like theirs is close to my love for my own mate. So please say yes...please.

Asymbii

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
beautiful

I love: I know you / I know love

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Oh my god, that was beautiful! Love Ethan and Aiden's story, you're such an amazing writer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So moving

This made my heart ache and feel with emotion it brought tears to my eyes.

Softly

Sweetly

Tears drip from my lashes

I know love

And I know passion

Thank you for the poem of heart

I will never forget it

As my eyes close and dream

Thinking of love and sweet embraces

And little kisses

I feel so alone

With not a warm body pressed close at night

But this poem brings me hope

For a future

Thank you.

For now I can finally cope.

And sleep

Sweetly

Softly

In the air of the night

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Beautiful ❤

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