All Comments on 'Office Fun'

As good as this was, I had to laugh when I read "swirling her practiced tongue beneath its swollen purple head before taking him completely down her swan-like throat." That was just too much! Don't think mine has ever been anywhere close to purple and I am not into waterfowl. A little less of the "purple prose" would make the story a better read.

A decent read (though you might want to be a bit more careful with editing e.g. it's dessert, not desert) but it was missing any build up. All of a sudden some guy is feeling up his secretary. And I'll be honest... a young blonde woman called Glenda? I wouldn't believe it.

But otherwise fairly enjoyable. Good effort.

The story has a nice and promising start with well written script. The sexual descriptions are very well portrayed. A sequel to this please.