All Comments on 'Food for a Dragon'

More!

Fantastic!

YES - definitely need more chapters!!!!!

I like it. I look forward to more!

may We have some more?

It will be fun to discover where the dragon takes her...and what happened to Ann's predecessors. Maybe life will look up for Ann now.

Your story has great promise. Your writing style is clear and concise. I look forward to see how this story progresses.

It made my pussy pulse. Thanks. =)

This is not a request, this is a demand, your story is amazing, I don't know what I'll do if you don't write more.

I Hope there is another chapter to this story! it was amazing! :)

The story felt really rushed and there wasn't much going into the actual senses rather than trying to get into the sex. Add some more detail next time and really put in all 5 senses to a point where the reader can really see and feel what is happening.

Good start, and the potential for a dragon with a harem is neat.

Thanks for your comments, mentioning that I need more detail really helps, I look back on it and know you are right. I will try an edit at some point to fix this.

Looking past the need for more editing, I adored this story! Great start. Ann is spunky, and your dragon is so cool and very sexy.