All Comments on 'Average: The Beginning'

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VampWriterVampWriterabout 12 years ago
Good Start

I like this a lot. There are so many directions you could go!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Sweet way to start a story. Avery and Connor are two of my new favorites.

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66about 12 years ago
So cute

Can't wait to see how this develops

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well darling, your roommate being Gay or Straight is inconsequential to you---> If he is as hot as you say he is---> You can hope to read his thoughts as long as want...as long as you understand those thoughts WILL NEVER INVOLVE YOU.

WHY WOULD SOME EXCEPTIONALLY BEAUTIFUL GUY BE ATTRACTED TO HIS UNREMARKABLE ROOMMATE (even if he's Homosexual; he's still got Standards)

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