All Comments on 'The Oath Ch. 04'

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Bfreetorun over 11 years ago

Excellent story...

I will eagerly await the next chapter. Keep up the good work. Mother/son is my favorite incest and sister/brother is my second favorite. You write about both, good for you. Mother/daughter mixed in with the others is good, too but not a stand alone for me.

Anonymousover 10 years ago

This is a clever and inventive series. Please continue.

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