All Comments on 'Brother's Best Friend Ch. 04'

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Amazing story can't wait for more

I can't wait 4 more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Finish it soon please!!!!!!!

finish this already....i cant wait 4 more

Am I the only one that thinks it is fucked up that he was all over her right after he was in the middle of fucking someone else? Ryder needs to apologize for his behavior; he needs to grow up! How absolutely messed up is it that he lectures her on sex practices but he can go fuck any chick he wants with no repercussions. It just seems way to fictional to ever happen. Katie needs to stand up for herself more. She needs to draw lines - at eighteen she should not be locked in her room or have to deal with a brother's friend fucking on her couch. It's her house! This story, and Katie's passiveness, make this story extremely frustrating to read.

You write so well had me on the edge of my seat just waiting to see what happens next excited to see where katie and Ryder's relationship goes from here!

Who/Where is Louise? I thought that was the main character's name. "Then there was me, Louise." And also...who's Bella and Brittany? Sorry...I just found this story and read all 4 chapters now. I really like this story but am a bit confused.

Ok so the main characters name was Louise but then i gto confused between this story and another story i was doing so now the main characters name is Katie. Brittany is Greg's twin sister and she will come into the story later on. I tried to write her in before hand but it just didnt match well. Also there will be long gaps between my writing just to warn you because i have alot of things going on and writing actually takes me awhile because i cant always think of things. I am currently writing two othr stories as well as this because i got sudden inspiration so they may be submitted before this one.

Thank you for clearing that up :) That being said....I'm really enjoying this story so far as well as the characters and their personalities. Will be looking for to the next chapter :D

where is the next chapter?? :)

write fast please.....

Please continue on the next chapter!!

OMGG PLEASEEE FINISH WRITING THE STORY :D ITS SO FREAKING AWESOME LOL !!!!!

Please write more for this story I think I'm in Love!!!!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! the anticipation was so exciting and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! Please hurry because that was really really hot!!!

I really hope you finish this story. Please finish it!

Okay never commented on here before but this was too good not to. I can honestly glace over the grammatical errors easily just please upload the next chapter! This story could possibly be one of the best I've read on here in the long run. Can't wait so don't stop!

first comment ever! woohoo! i have kept checking your page for months now! :(

pleassee update asap! cant wait for the next chapter! excellent writing btw! :D

Please please please finish the story. can't wait to read more...

this is story series is the best ive ever read. it is the perfect balance between everything. please write more it is addicting.

Hope there's still more to come! I wanna see how hot and heavy these two get! Good job!

Omg I love your story so much!! It's amazing!! Hope there's heaps more to come I can't wait ;)

Can't wait to read the next part :-)

I've been waiting and waiting and it's killing me! Please hurry with the next chapter - this story is brilliant! :D

Great story only issues is the waiting! I have been patiently waiting and so want to read the next chapter!