by SSSultan
Because she is not doing this willingly, the actions and words are meaningless, he might as well be fucking a blow up doll. If this is his fantasy, then I would suggest another title, be careful what you wish for...you might get it.
Let's think about it, 30yrs from now, what is she going to be like? What personality will she have...what dreams will she have. If he takes away his control over her, what will she be left with, after not having being allows to think for herself?
A very, very sad story
I would politely suggest you are reading way too much into this. This is, after all, a fantasy story in a "mind control" category; I would hope that no one would actually want any of this to ever occur at all, let alone last for 30 years...
Still, thank you for reading! Hopefully, you find something more to your liking in the future.
I loved it! It's perfect that you included the hammer and the punishment fit the crime.
Are you going to write a next installment? It is only 11am, after all ;)
First anon: it's porn. That means it is automatically at a lower standard than any other form of writing. I also need to say: if you aren't into this, read something else.
SSSultan: amazing work. I hope to read more from you!