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A Pool with a View

byCharlieGG©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/07/12

HOT!

Very naughty and sexy!

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by Boxlicker10104/07/12

This was pretty good

This was pretty good, especially if it is a first effort. Your sentence structure could be improved but, all inn all, a nice, sexy read.

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by Dual_Triode04/07/12

Nice Job!

I think I stayed in that same hotel once. :)

A very good first effort. I look forward to more works from you.

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by litfan1004/07/12

Nicely done!

Very nice narrative style. This story reads to the audience very smoothly and with a distinct voice. Very straightforward and enjoyable. A very welcome addition to Literotica! Good luck with all your writing; I look forward to reading more from you.

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by Tio_Narratore04/08/12

A nice, easy-flowing narrative style, with an informality that matches the tale being told. And quite a fun tale as well. Keep up the good work, Charlie.

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by Erotonaut04/12/12

Nice debut

Glad to have you aboard.

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by Brigid_Mo_Chroi07/05/12

A fun read

Enjoyed this very much. It was a very fun read. Both exciting and humorous.

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by TinyBeth08/22/12

Very good work! I really enjoyed it. I look forward to seeing more stories from you.

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by Anonymous08/23/12

Great story ...

A most enjoyable read - thank you.

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by bi_cycler09/20/13

Nice short story

You write well and I felt I was in the room with you and your wife.

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by nkdjim212/28/13

Liked it!

Liked it a lot, wished was longer.
Reminds me of a few times at the beach when the waves dropped my swim suit to my knees but all I got were laughs.

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