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The After Party of Her Affair

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by Anonymous

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by nakdsub06/10/12

This is exactly the CRAP I absolutely hate...

God, I wish there was a way I could give crap like this negative 5*. I case anyone else reads the comments first before reading trash like this, none of the tags say, "CUCKHOLD, but that's what this is!

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by Anonymous06/10/12

No warning:

This is the story of a selfish old woman who thinks it is OK to cheat because she thinks it is OK to cheat. That circular logic reveals a stupid spouse. But worse, the husband is even dumber than her. This is another stupid spouses cheating wife story. All too common on this site. ANd worse the writer needed a good editor and lessons in plotting and characterization so we could hat it even more.

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by digdaddyrich06/10/12

Wow ! I didn't think anyone would be that dense

Not knowing his wife was fucking around on him after all of the proof was right in front of his face.

It was a shame that she disrespected him so much by allowing him to go down on her, and not tell him her pussy was full of some asshole's cum.

She didn't even think enough of her husband to warn him. He may have wanted to by-pass her cheating cunt for the night, and just jack-off and squirt his cum on her slut face.

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by Anonymous06/10/12

No need to read the story the writers page is enough.
Quote: "I am a married man curious to the cuckold lifestyle."

It should read: "I am a limp dicked cuckold and I want the world to know that I am no longer a man."

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by Anonymous06/10/12

This is my recollection of the night that, according to my wife, was the first time she cheated on me with another man.

This should have been the end, assuming he had balls.

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by virago92006/10/12

another one gone

I mark another writer unreadable not to mention one that can't identify fetish when they write it.

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by tazz31706/10/12

HOLLY IS NO LONGER HOLY

nor is she mine. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Huedogg206/10/12

Literotica

start a rating system for shit lower than a one.

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by Anonymous06/10/12

Poorly plotted

How can you reconcile "After twenty years, our marriage was adrift." with "I should have seen it coming. I should have seen it happening. I was too young and too naive." That just doesn't make any sense at all.

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by Pistolpackinpete06/10/12

why so mad folks...

....it was obvious from the first paragraph what the gist was, so why bother reading it.

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by Anonymous06/10/12

What tripe....

Posted by a person in very serious need of psychological help.

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by user11006/10/12

really, licyou69?

the point of the story is that you're retarded? i cant believe you wrote anything after:
"You told me to have a good time!"

so gay. you should be ashamed.

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by TNDRIVER06/10/12

category

While, many of these stories are good in their on area of interest and separating my on interest of what I like to read. I find a wide rage of viewership in the comments section, have always thought it would be better on both the authors and readers if Literotica developed a stand alone category for either the hotwife ( cuckold ) stories or the torch the bitch or son-of-a-bitch crowd. Just both an observation and opinion of mine. But as we don't the ratings of both get greatly distorted by the group looking for the opposite type of story. Somehow I'm guessing though the founding deciders of the categories probably never figured both types of stories would be in one large category.

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by Anonymous06/10/12

Well done.

I always look forward to reading your work. Thanks.

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by Anonymous06/10/12

pure trash, no loving wife here

put this trash in fetish or gay for good ratings otherwise just get ripped

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by Libertineman06/10/12

While the husband is obviously naive, the story is well written. They just may learn to enjoy their new life style.

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by Anonymous06/10/12

Then it's time to man up

You can show her the error of her ways in several methods first and for most is to dump the slut, and make her paramour pay a hefty lawsuit. An alternate is to go the comando route and catch both of them unsuspecting and hold batting practice on them. Or just remove his reproductive glands and feed them to her for dinner.

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by njlauren06/10/12

too young and naive

After 20 years of marriage? Kind of stretching it. Also if this is going to have more parts you should note it since this is a story fragment.

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by Anonymous06/10/12

Challenge

Your stories are well-written. But here's a challenge: you always end your stories before the discovery or the consequences. You should write one to see how the lives of the three or four people develop after the point where you always stop.

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by winterfoxx06/10/12

Excellent start ...

Well written! It leaves me with a wish of seeing how you will develop these characters! So what is the next phase for them?

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by Duna06/10/12

Choices are the next divorce, revenge, open marriage, cuckolding for him

She was honest with him and a normal reconcilation is out of the his choices. He remained divorce, revenge, open marriage, cuckolding as choice only After 20 years marriage he may be 45 years old. This age is an exact time to restart his life with a second chance. (Second chance is a newer girlfriend, mate, wife) Moreover he may be common children with his second chance. Have they get any common children? Papatoad wrote some excellent revenge stories with similar starting plote with extrem succesful revenge (the common children were above 18 years in his stories).

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by Duna06/10/12

Look at this guy (above 40 years) from North Caroline he restarted his life with a 18 years old filipina:
From You Tube. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bIvJms3wlaY
His sentences from his You Tube video:
I was married to an American bitch for 18 years. She got away with fraud and turned my oldest daughter against me. Going through divorce in my mid 40's I decided to look for love in a country that was family oriented. I married a beautiful 18 yr old Filipina and now I feel young again and in love!!!
He has common daughter with this woman.....................

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by Anonymous06/10/12

another chucky author

likes to write chucky stories

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by Lickideesplit06/10/12

good, not great, flash story

I agree that, at their age/experience level, the excuse for continuing on to creampie was VERY weak. Either admit to her right then that you are glad she brought a new dessert home (and is willing to share with a guy to whom she is slipping away) OR kick her butt out and send her to the Bull's place forthwith! Hotter the first way, more PC (especially on LW) the latter way. Take your pick. I see no middle ground which is realistic!
4*

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by Anonymous06/10/12

all the sickos

when commenting on these types of stories all say the same thing good start, they are begging you to make their fantasies for them. ugh

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by lawrenc06/10/12

The only answer

Divorce

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by Anonymous06/10/12

regretably you have some talent but

you seek attention by being a spineless weak self disrespected wimp by choice - sad but never to change for the better.

Poor you writer.

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by Anonymous06/11/12

And if he said jump off the nearest bridge and reasonably deep body of water?
They apparently each get what they want. And she neither belonged to him, nor anything but someone to support her. he stays with the knowledge of what he is and what she is.

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by Anonymous06/14/12

What a pile of shit!

Boring as hell.

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by RePhil06/16/12

That's not a fair comment

A Pile of Shit is great fertilizer for the Garden. This story has no redeeming qualities whatsoever!! OK OK it's a pile of shit!

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by Scorpio4406/16/12

Once the gates opened...

the author believes they won't ever close. When I was in high school my brother borrowed my baseball glove often... does that mean it was no longer my glove?
The thinking that his wife ever "belonged" to him is as nuts as believing that once my brother used the glove it was no longer my glove.
There are more choices than on and off. More choices than monogamy and celebacy. This story could have explored polyamory... but it didn't.

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by SleeplessinMD306/16/12

One of the problem I have with this story...

is where are we going? The wife fuck over the husband effectively replacing him in the bedroom. How the hell can her taking a lover be a misunderstanding? How can something so important to him be treated like she picked up a different brand of soap or failed to meet him for dinner because she thought he meant Steak & Shake rather than Denny's. The husband is a fool for failing to communicate what is important to him. It is not clear whether martial fidelity is important to him. Where is the author going with these stories?

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by Anonymous06/21/12

Sleepless in Seattle ...

An over used theme. A cheating wife and a bi guy that likes a creampie.... Flat lifeless characters.

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by Vanesca06/27/12

baseball glove use?

Hey there Scorpio 44. I was just wondering if your brother ever ejaculated inside your baseball glove before he returned it to you?

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by Huedogg206/27/12

ok, either this dude is a moron

or his wife is....i would say she a slut and he's an idiot. either way I gave it a 1

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by Anonymous07/04/12

4 stars

A number of people constantly shit talk you (pardon my French). For some reason, they gang up on you the week you publish a new story. Why do they read your stories in the first place? You get more negative comments than most authors but that's because you overall get more comments. A loving wives story cannot be about a faithful wife.
Some erotic Stories are really pornography. Yours are not. They are not perfect but they aren't pornographic, they are erotic.

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by Anonymous07/07/12

If this was in FETISH where it belongs

There would be no 'shit talking'.

Post it in LW and there will be shit talking and low scores.

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by rvws07/11/12

Scorpio44, you are wrong

"There are more choices than on and off. More choices than monogamy and celebacy"
There may be more choices, but they are the wrong choices. In a true, loving marriage there is only ONE choice, MANOGOMY. The wife in this story is a stupid worthless slut, as all slutwives are worthless trollops.. The husband is a moron. And just to clairify, when you marry, you belong to each other. Anything else is substandard.
By the way, technically this was a well writen story, but I hated the subject matter. This was not a loving wife story.

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by Anonymous07/16/12

I DONT HIT WOMEN BUT SHES A SLUT I WOULD SPAT ON HER AN KICKED HER STRAIGHT OUT

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by Anonymous07/28/12

Fuck, yeah.

I really enjoy licking my wife out after she's been with her current lover.

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by RePhil09/04/12

Licyou69 message from your wife

I will send her home with a nice warm creampie for your dinner.

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by Anonymous10/09/12

Totally agree with rvws

I would like to add that the Husband is a Fucking loser. How clueless can you be. Stupid story

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by Anonymous11/19/12

Ignore the haters, this story was very well written and my wife and I enjoyed it together a great deal.

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by betrayedbylove11/19/12

Damn

I hate fucking cheaters, no matter what the circumstance. Marriage is a pledge to love, honor and be faithful. If you want multiple partners, don't get married. If you have the urge, get a divorce. Then become a slut, man or woman. All cheaters should suffer in pain.

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by terrydavid02/28/13

Just another fag/wimp author..

OMG, this garbage gets old. However, it was a good thing we read the comments first so as to avoid scanning this dog shit.

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by Anonymous02/28/13

Should pay more attention to which the author......

I didn't look to see who the author was before reading this and now I wanna puke all over the place. I don't read stuff written by faggot authors for that reason but I wasn't paying enough attention. I will NEVER make that mistake again. FUCKING SICK!!!

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by Anonymous05/12/13

Barbara Cartland fan club

I can only believe that critics of these type of stories want to read about pretty little wives who cook Sunday dinners and take the kids to after school clubs. Is that your understanding of a loving wife on an erotic literature site? You are mentally unstable and sadly deluded if you think these stories are about real life, quite apart from the fact that most of the more rabid commentators seem incapable of forming a sentence without making some grammatical error. How can you read a story about this subject matter by accident. Do not read stories that you know you find objectionable. I think incest is distasteful so do not read stories in that category. The clue is in the category title and the site owners guidance on what the LW category should include. To the author; not a bad story, well written although a little short on character development.

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by cantbuymy05/12/13

Cheating cunt

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by EgoTrixi05/19/13

dumb!

Her husband, being dumb, slow in thought and simple minded, seemed to ask for her cheating. What I miss in this "story"? Just about everything. Maybe Licyou69 should change his nick - "watchyoulic"?

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by Anonymous05/19/13

Amazing stupidity!

Even for a fictional story, I'm amazed that the author could make the husband that big a fool. The wife is SO obvious a cheating slut. Wake up and divorce her.

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