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The Lake Monster Ch. 01

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by MizT08/26/12

Congrats on your first story. I haven't yet decided if it is my cup of tea or not but will definitely read the next chapter or two before making my decision. It just a very original idea and for that I give you credit and wish you luck.

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by Anonymous08/26/12

Ooo, promising. Well written but a bit short. Keep it up!

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by futanariluvr09/23/12

Great job!

Very well written and short. Looking forward to reading more. A great set up for a continuing series!

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