All Comments on 'Red Hot'

Anyone who calls your story boring shouldn't be on Literotica reading the stories in the first place.

It's a well crafted, well written story. I like the protagonist and the progressive rise in erotic temperature. "Down boy, down!" That's what it's all about and it worked.

I look forward to your future submissions.

Bravo!

Part two please! Oh, and quickly please as I am holding my breath. ;-)