All Comments on 'The Bath'

It made me smile, and my pants just a little tighter.

Okay, missed there a bit. Seems the catagory definitions weren't clear enough. For a short - hope it was a good read.

I liked that it was realistic.

As for the 'mature' comments, it's up to the author where to put the stories. Some of mine could be mature, couples, or BDSM or a few other categories.

I would suggest using one of the editors available, They can help with the grammar and spelling mistakes.

Keep writing Rg1637

This was hot, and nicely written...straight to the point!