Frustration drives fiction. You beautifully capture both its physical and emotional dimensions.
Thanks for your support everyone!
This is a great story, and SO relatable. Thank you for sharing something thought-provoking.
Told so well it seems I could feel The frustration and need. While BDSM is not my thing, this story stands as a representation of marriage and love. Neither is everything the other wants, each tries to be and do what the other needs, each sacrifices for the greater good, one falls short of hope and expectations, and the other is too considerate of the effort made to say so, and lowers the expectation, accepting the disappointment without expressions the need for more. Each one gives, each it grateful for the gift from the other.
Thank you Cin
And you just might get what you deserve you spoiled brat.
I'm counting on it! :o)
I see that you were busy keeping me company yesterday. Thank you very much for your support.
I thank everyone here, and on my private feedback, for your support for this story. I was unsure how it would be received, but you have made the effort to write, and post it, worthwhile.
Cin, very well written. You paint a nice picture at your frustration level with this relationship. How you want so much than what he is able to give. It truly is an act. I would recommend that this play ends and the actress move to her next performance.
Cinner, you know I find your work very well written. I adore your style. I feel this is only a taste of what you could have done with this piece. It's a tease and almost too subtle for me. If it were longer I think the characters could and would pop off the page. It feels like the edges of a puzzle, without getting the whole picture. There's barely a setting although the theme is apparent and over the top in just a few sentences.
I wanted more. I want to know her, I want to understand him. I've been left longing and hungry for the rest. There is more to this story and this is only a taste of what could be...I would enjoy another chapter or an edited longer version. I love your writing, but in this case, I want the full meal. I only got a taste, albeit a delicious mouthful.
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