by inyotefi
Glad you're back. There are too few (new) Alba stories out there these days.
Or does your intro mean that you are done with writing?
I said it before, I say it again: you are the very best Dark Angel writer around, and this was another masterpiece. Yes it took long but damn was it worth it. Please, please dont let this be the last story you do!!!???
Amazing. The final story for Craked Mirror is your best DA story ever I loved it. Wish there was MUCH MORE
Hey, man!
Wow, that was awesome. I really liked the Mirror Crack'd series and the finale was simply epic!!!
Hey its finally done, welcome back dude, so glad you're writting again! This was FUCKING AWESOME, you deserve the highest praise. I dig all your stories with Jessica Alba, she's smoking hot; but this was your very best. Fantastic; thank you.
Again, you are one of the best if not the best writer of Dark Angel & Alba stories!!! I really hope you continue to write them!!! Thanks!!!
Outstanding Dark Angel erotica saga, maybe even your best, can't decide
Evocative, thrilling, sleek, & hot sizzling Jessica Alba sex; who can ask for more, and yet I mourn cow this is the final chapter
5/5 - Amazing!