All Comments on 'The Princess Chronicles Ch. 01'

by PSTwinkle

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice!!

I can only hope that Master and Mistress are father and teenage daughter and that the slave slut is the mother of his Princess?

sheanna23sheanna23about 11 years ago
if u r taking ideas

i think it would b quite interesting to have the piggy take the place of the princess by learning to please their Master much better than the original princess ever did...but thats just my idea. feel free to use it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice read, but...

Please don't make the chapters into incest like the other commenter asked. It can be imagined into one or not, and it should be left up to the reader. Incest would honestly ruin the series for me, having been raped by a family member.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
ya.....no thanks...

More degradation presented as erotica. Take a challenge and write D/s-B/D without it. As the saying goes--more for you, 'cause I'm gone.

PSTwinklePSTwinkleabout 11 years agoAuthor
thanks

Thanks for your ideas and feedback. Incest is not my thing but thanks anyway...

The chapters are based on real events I have explored with my Master.

I filed under BDSM so if degradation is not your thing, try another genre...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Racist mostly,

but rampantly sexist and--sorry--patriarchal (sp?).

And the idea of calling someone "Piggy." Oh. Maybe her "name" was not capped.

Read "Lord of the Flies." (That's maybe where you got the idea?)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
You must be a literature major--

or just a very serious reader, or you wouldn't have chosen the name "piggy."

kisses all over you

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