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Strange Days Ch. 83-86

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by DarkSoul_Dragon01/27/13

not the best way to end such a fatastic story, but you did make me cry, there is alot of emotion in here and really feel like it was worth all the time you put into this wonder.

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by MysticCupcake01/27/13

No words

Just wow...please continue to write and I look forward to your next story

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by Anonymous01/27/13

tears

you son of a bitch leading us to believe she died you evil delicious genius you. I swear when i stopped crying I was laughing my ass off about how i got tricked.

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by redskyes01/27/13

:)

Glad you enjoyed it!

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by Anonymous01/27/13

You prick!

I totally got tricked as well. Can't believe you did that but good show.

By the way I had just started reading your story about a week and a half ago before this got posted and just finished. It was very enjoyable, I thought the characters were really filled out. Just an awesome story sir/ma'am.

~Sirius (futa palace)

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by redskyes01/27/13

Re: You prick!

Thank you. :)

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by Anonymous01/28/13

about ending

Can someone explain the ending to me? Is sarah alive or just amy's imagination in the end. If shes alive what do you mean by ( in previous paras) " its difficult to get by without sarah" and how amy is reminded sarah has missed out on their son's life..

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by redskyes01/28/13

Re: about ending

Sarah is alive and well. As a recently new parent, I know how hard it is, how big of an adjustment it can be. My partner in crime working two hours later than normal seemed like a really big deal in the beginning, and it was a struggle to get through it all, particularly when they were out of town for work. As for Sarah missing out on her son's life, Amy is merely referring to those special moments when their son learns something new or does something for the first time and Sarah isn't around to see it. I have both been around for those moments with my own child, and I have missed them. My son said "yes" and nodded the first time with me, but my other half was working late and wasn't home to see it. Amy was talking about moments like that.

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by dlj40301/28/13

Thanks!

Thank you so much for this amazing piece of work! So not my usual fare, but I enjoyed it immensely. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

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by redskyes01/28/13

Re: Thanks!

You are most welcome. :)

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by Valerys01/28/13

Great end to a great story

Thank you. Thank you for writing this. This is one of my favorite, if not my favorite, stories on this site. I think I've followed this story from the very beginning, and I want to tell you how grateful I am that you decided to share your tale with us. That being said, I sincerely hope you continue writing, your skills are nigh impeccable, your characters are believable and relatable, and your style is very easy and relaxing to read. To take all of your talent and not use it would be, in my opinion, a disservice to yourself and to all your fans.
If you DO plan to continue reading, thank you, from the bottom of my heart. I will look forward to your next story with bated breath and a thumping heart, while I re-read this story to tide me over. Good luck with your family, your career, and your life.

Sincerely,
Valerys

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by redskyes01/28/13

Re: Great end to a great story

Oh, I'll definitely keep writing. Keep an eye out because I'll have two more stories going up soon, ready to post. After those, who knows. I have two more uncompleted stories waiting for me to get back to them (I had to step away from them due to time constraints), more story ideas noted down, and I'm working on getting published (a different story entirely). Busy times. :)

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by giggityguy01/28/13

Incredible work

I'm sad that this story is over, but a well constructed ending is the most important part of any work of literature, and in this piece you have excelled. It has been remarkable watching you develop as a writer and storyteller over the course of this series. To be honest, I mostly read your series as literature rather than solely erotica (although it is no slouch in that department either), and I have to tell you that you have managed to create a unique story that is compelling to all readers. But by far the area you excel most in is your ability to develop characters into real people, and make us feel what Amy feels, and generate a genuine connection. It almost ripped my heart our when I thought that Sarah had died, because of how much emotion Sarah represents. This particular skill of yours is what sets you apart from other writers, and what makes me love your work so much. I encourage you to continue honing your gift, and possibly branch out into mainstream publication (if you haven't already); I know that readers everywhere will love what you create. Most of all, I look forward to seeing where your pen will take us next. Hats off to you!

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by Anonymous01/29/13

sad

OMG!! Your are so mean!! i was crying cuz i thought sara was dead!! great story btw... there are few onea that i read and take time to read all of it but with this one? found the jack pot!!

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by AlphaCherokee01/29/13

WOW...just WOW!!!

I don't cry and I don't read normally, but I have happily and intensely read this whole series. I was crying as you described her life with William without Sarah. I have kids and can't bare the thought of life without my wife. Then you surprise us with a twist ending that she still alive!!! Well fucking played! I am very impressed with this entire series. The wait was well worth it. Great job. I hope to see a spin off maybe. More kids, maybe a thriller involving a mature William. Please don't stop writing. You're great at it.

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by geonisis01/29/13

Fantastic

Amazing, stupendous, faboulous, I can't even think of any more words right now to describe how utterly awesome this story is. Just plain brilliant. My girlfriend, woke up when I screamed, "YES!!!", at the end, and I had her read it, and now we're both sitting here with tears in our eyes. Just wow. One if the absolute best stories I have ever read, and I have been reading from day one. My girlfriend, who is insisting I put this part, as who turned me on to the story. I had never heard of futa culture before this, and was not even interested, and I have to say I still largely am not. One glaring exception is this absolutely divine work you have here. I'm just, I have goosebumps, and I'm elated, ,and joyful, and happy. This was just an amazing experience all around, and when/if you ever write anything else I will be there to experience it and support you. You are amazing.
Thank You, XD

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by Anonymous01/31/13

you amaze!

This has been one hell of a ride, bless you for creating this story for all of us that have read it.

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by Anonymous01/31/13

Never again!

This reminded me so fucking much of Clannad! You never do this kinda shit again redskyes! You had me balling for so long! D:

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by Anonymous02/02/13

Jerk!

Don't scare us like that!!!!

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by WanderingLost4202/03/13

Well played good sir!

This is by far my favorite series on this site. But I have to say, fuck you for that ending. I was fucking crying by the time I got to that last line! Thank you for all the time and energy you put into this series and I hope that this isn't the last time you grace us with your writing.

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by OnyxShadow02/05/13

That was not funny.

I read all 86 chapters, and I greatly enjoyed almost all of it. I'm not entirely sure why you pulled that silliness at the end. Other than that, it was a good conclusion to my favorite series on this site. I will be eagerly looking forward to your next story.

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by redskyes02/05/13

Wow!

I'm falling behind on keeping up with the feedback here. I confess to watching my tumblr inbox more closely.

Thank you for all of the kinds words, everyone!

@Alpha: A story about William? Oh, wow, I hadn't considered that. Hmm.

@geonisis: I had no interest in futanari stuff either. I stumbled across a futa story on Hentai Foundry and thought "oh, wow, okay, not what I expected, enough of that then". One day a light just clicked on, and I had to wonder what it would be like to experience such a radical change, how it might feel, how it could change perceptions. After that, I couldn't stop writing.

@Wandering: Good. An emotional response was what I was going for. Hope that doesn't make me sadistic. ;) Keep an eye out. More of my work should be showing up here soon (one is in the queue already).

@Anon: I'm not familiar with Clannad, but I'm glad the twist-end moved you. :)

@Onyx: It wasn't meant to be funny. It was meant to be dramatic. I knew going in that it wouldn't impact everyone the same way, but I also knew that it would impact the majority of the readership as it was meant to. I can't please everyone, but I can certainly target the majority. Thank you for sticking along for the ride though. :)

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by Anonymous02/05/13

grrrrrrrr

Asshole. You know why.

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by redskyes02/06/13

Re: grrrrrrrr

I suppose I do. :)

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by lostone006902/06/13

Thank you!

Thank you for the hard work and passion you put into this excellent story! The best thing about it is that you probably could take it and re-work it into a rated "R" or even "PG-13" and it would STILL be an awesome story!

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by Anonymous02/06/13

bravo good sir

Easily one of my favorite non published reads ever I have read all 86 chapters most of them twice at least I agree with many com enters that the last bit was a bit mean but still amazing. You described everything with such passion that I know you love these characters, and maybe even the people they represent.

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by Anonymous02/09/13

Will be missed

This story went from being sex driven to story driven, i am a member of this site aswell but have yet to submit a story which will change soon, as i am working on my own, inspired by your style of writing, the way you phrase your dialogue and describe the vivid emotion filled acts that become pivot points of the story, and i hope eventually i will have a story that is as emotional and powerful as yours has been, and i'm sad to have to let these characters go, maybe at some point you will touch on williams story? Thanks redskyes for your devotion to this franchise of love and life

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by Anonymous02/09/13

Wonderful end to a great series

Thoroughly enjoyed the run; I hope you'll end up coming back to so we can get another firsthand account of one or more girls being blessed with Freyja's gift (or a guy who wants to experience what's it like to be a busty futa for a little while, just throwing it out there...)

One thing I'll need a clarification on - when Amy swallows the piece of Freyja, Helena says she'll help her contain it and remakes Amy's 'mortal shell'. Were the results just Amy becoming more supernaturally noticed and able to produce sperm, or was she turned into some sort of goddess or magical being like Helena? Basically, is Amy still human in a loose sense and Helena just physically fixed her (Amy is truly mortal), or did Helena give her additional powers so can she do some supernatural or magical feats?

And a minor note - now that we know about Helena, I would have loved for you to have a scene where Amy or someone else notices that Helena appears to be hiding a decent sized bulge behind her toga. Unless she was supposed to always be all-woman, but hey, wishful thinking and all that...

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by redskyes02/09/13

Re: bravo good sir

Yeah, I'm pretty attached to the characters. :)

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by redskyes02/09/13

Re: Will be missed

I'm tempted to write something about William, but I haven't started putting down ideas in my notes or anything. Working on a couple other things at the moment.

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by redskyes02/09/13

Re: Wonderful end to a great series

What exactly Helena did to Amy (or what she has become) will be explained in a side-story, if I can make it happen. As for Helena herself, she is all woman. More about her would be revealed in the side-story too. :)

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by liquid_yellow02/10/13

Wow!

This series was a helluva ride!

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by Anonymous02/12/13

Helluva ride!

Thanks redskyes! Loved the series :)

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by VenDeezel03/03/13

Something to aspire to

Not sure what all tha fuss is about with the ending. That, like the rest of the story, reeled us in to the same whirlpool of emotion that has permeated the entire series. As an aspiring writer myself, I hope I can write a story as enthralling. This one hits the very mark that I think makes a tru classic. And that is simply creating a story that ppl don't want to end but can be more than satisfed with it's conclusion. Among Literotica works (and I've read quite a few now) this one is more than deserving of being a Hall of Famer. I salute your God given talent and hope I can create a world as deep and captivating as you have. Thank you, reskyes :)

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by Anonymous03/29/13

So I just spent... ten or so hours of my life reading this story all the way through. Holy. Shit. That. Was. Awesome. I kind of want to headbutt you for the twist at the end, though. ALL THOSE FEELS, MAN.

Really, this whole thing was freaking amazing. My only regret is that Holly never got to fuck Amy. Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing if you write anything more like that Futatales story you have up (which was also amazingly mindblowing. Write another story about the giant futa demon pleasepleasepleaseplease). Either way, kudos man! Thanks for the ride.

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by Anonymous04/02/13

Emotional ride?

This story is amazing! Even though all the kinky-fuckery has had it's fightes with my christianity, and the story being a emotional rollercoaster when I couldn't stop myself from reading ten chapter in one stretch, I do not regret having read it.
No, I'm not trying to make a hatefull/angry comment.

PS: when I read the last line (before "-END"), I cried in joy (I'm a late teen guy, and consider myself abit emotionally stiff :/) and almost shed a tear. Anyway, thank you for a wonderful story!

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by Anonymous04/14/13

Jesus christ you fucky fuck. Never pull a trick like that again.

That said, this whole series was amazing.

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by caesarionr6904/15/13

nice ending

i just started reading this series about a week ago and i have raced through this series. you have done an excellent job by creating a good storyline, nice character devellopment and that nice trick at the end was fabulous. you have the writing talent to enthrall people with your stories. you make you readers care about the characters you create and that is a great skill not many writers are capable of.
5 stars for the whole series

gonna read your next series now

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by Anonymous04/17/13

Please Red!!!

That was just way to mean. I love you but that was not nice at all. I just lost my wife to death last October, and then you took away Sarah. I couldn't stand the thought of Amy going through that; I almost shut off the computer and erased your link I was so angry. You might have thought it was a cute way to build the emotional impact of a great ending, and it may have been so for many. It was NOT for me. Lynn

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by redskyes04/17/13

Hi!

Thank you for all of the kind words, everyone!

Lynn, Sarah isn't gone. Read the very last line again. :)

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by Anonymous04/22/13

Confused

I have really enjoyed this series but must confess to being a bit confused. You said at one point that it had been two years since the baby was born and supposedly Sara had died. And that Amy was having a hard time without her leading us to all believe she had died in childbirth. Then in the last couple lines you imply Sara is alive. How is Amy having a hard time without her if she is alive? And everything in those last few paragraphs before Violet leaves further backs up the impression Sara is dead. Please help me to understand. All in all though, thank you for a great read! DJ

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by redskyes04/23/13

Re: Confused

I'll repost this earlier reply.

Sarah is alive and well. As a recently new parent, I know how hard it is, how big of an adjustment it can be. My partner in crime working two hours later than normal seemed like a really big deal in the beginning, and it was a struggle to get through it all, particularly when they were out of town for work. As for Sarah missing out on her son's life, Amy is merely referring to those special moments when their son learns something new or does something for the first time and Sarah isn't around to see it. I have both been around for those moments with my own child, and I have missed them. My son said "yes" and nodded the first time with me, but my other half was working late and wasn't home to see it. Amy was talking about moments like that.

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by Anonymous04/23/13

Thank You :)

Thank you for your explanation. I was sort of headed in that direction as I have been there myself. My wife was a stay at home mom while I worked two jobs. I was also thinking there may have been some divine intervention because of the magic and gods in your story. Thank you again for an entertaining read and for clearing up my confusion.
DJ

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by Anonymous05/02/13

Damnit bitch you made me cry

You wait until the last line to say that Sarah lives all the while implying that she dies..... soooooo freaking cruel. I have to say that i was enthralled by this story from the simple discovery in the beginning, to the surprise of Amy's rage and injury in the middle and the Supernatural'esque (spelling, I know) ending the entire tale was well crafted and enjoyed it thoroughly. Thank you

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by XiraeK05/09/13

Wow

I absolutely adored this series. I've only found 10 series that have truly blown my mind and I've been reading literature on this site for years. The emotions portrayed in this story are spot on and exquisite in every way, it wasn't just a quick fix. I sincerely thank you for sharing this!


p.s. I totally almost cried at the end.

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by Rhomanov05/16/13

Sigh

Felt let down. Was great writing and a great read but .... I walked away from this story with the opinion Amy is still an immature selfish girl who caused more harm than good. I mentioned it a few chapters back - same opinion of her then. The ending just didn't seem to match up to the threads woven.

This read like a great book where the close made me glad it was over so I wouldn't have to read anymore of it.

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by Anonymous06/13/13

Loved it mostly, but.....

I really admire, your writing, builds up the emotion and feelings of a character brilliantly. However, I just read over the whole series, and I've got to say, it didn't exactly go the way I wanted it too. Marrying Sarah, having a baby with her and all that; a bit too safe and mundane if you ask me. I really had loved the character of Trevor ( seem to be the only one). But I still really think your a great author, and can't wait to see more of your work.

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by Anonymous06/16/13

Wonderful

I just finished all the chapters. The story was incredible and pulled me into their world the whole time. It got better at the end and more deep. I cried when I thought Amy lost Sarah...the crushing loss and loneliness became real. The ending had me laughing and smiling like a fool. Thank you for such a great story. The best one I've read on here.

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by Anonymous06/20/13

Wooooow

I just spent the passed three days reading this story. It's truly remarkable! You almost made me cry! AND let me tell you!!! I hardly ever cry! You're amazing and this story was practically perfect!

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by Anonymous07/04/13

A good story but...

You are a great writer. I love reading fiction, erotic and non-erotic, and yours is very good. But having read this series from beginning to end in only a few days I have to say it's not as good as it could be. This is going to sound strange, especially considering the site this story is on, but a lot of the sex scenes actually took away from the story. Some of them were really hot, but I became invested in Amy, Sarah, Trevor and the rest of your characters. I was invested in their relationships and lives, but the sex parts overshadowed that and took away time for development of their characters. It was around chapter 50 when Amy decided she was through hiding, yet she didn't have the confrontation with Trevor until 30 chapters later. And we never did get Amy's confession to her mother. Even the god/dionysus story felt very rushed as it took a backseat to the sex. I know this was meant to be a sex story, but I could have used more story and less sex.

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