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Bee and David Ch. 03 Pt. 01

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by islandqt02/14/13

ooooooooh

I love this story so much!! I love how she's not intimidated by his wealth or demeanor. Who's the southern dude though? very scary.

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by ariesgirl02/14/13

I'm now more confused as to who Bee is. I can tell she has been hurt at some point in her life. It looks as though Bee need a ton of alcohol just to let her hair down.

We all are about to see the real David. He knows Lan has the hots for Bee but does he know about the creepy southern guy? He was in VIP so he must have some money. Well Bee will have to find out the hard way how much Lan loves her. She is so in denial just because they are friends.

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by Anonymous02/14/13

wow wow

No she think of laney as a friend. she totatlly smitten head over heel in love
with david. Thank you for another great installment. you are such a wonderful
writer. five stars i cant wait for david and bee passion for each other reach
to another level. thank you again for your talent writen skill.

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by Anonymous02/14/13

Loving this story!!!

You did an great job at describing Bee there's no need to let everything out in one chapter. You'll get people complaining still but I disagree with them completely. This story is keeps me wanting the next chapter like tomorrow. :D

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by Anonymous02/15/13

50 Shades of Grey

Domineering older man - check
Asking her about eating - check
Inner goddess - check
Stalker tendencies - check
Best friend who's in love with her - check
Intoxicated rendezvous - check
Grey eyes - check
Exorbitantly rich - check
Extensive security detail - check

I really really love your writing style and the characters. I just need you to break away from the 50 shades of grey. This is a promising tale and I don't wanna miss out on it because of the similarities between shitty fanfiction and your developing masterpiece. Five stars nonetheless.

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by Anonymous02/20/13

I love this story

I thought chapter 4 was submitted...where is it? I need my Bee and David fix!

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by Anonymous02/23/13

Awesome. read it all for the first time to day and loved it, and that's not just because I know the writer.... : }

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by Anonymous02/24/13

love to read

I am a big fan of this story Bee and David. What you describing the writing
out of 50 Shades of Grey and this story Bee and David. I have read in so many
novels in my life time and you are wrong them lines that are in 50 shades of grey.
Are in lot of novels that i have read. She is doing a beautiful job with writing this
story. Also give her fives stars that she absolutly deserve. Thank you for writing
this great story. From one of your fan.

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