by Cletis
This is a nice extension of Controlling Bobbi and yet takes a different direction than the original. Great job and i hope you continue the alternate reality arc.
Hi everyone. Thanks for the feedback. I am working on part 2 right now. It is already a little longer. Sorry for those of you who want all chapters to be longer. I just let them go where they will and hope they are at least 5 pages in the word processor. Hope you all enjoy the chapters that are to follow.
Cletis
Thanks again for discussing this idea with me. It's not where I was going, but it is really interesting and I'm sure readers will enjoy it.
Arty
Does anyone know of any similar story with wifes trigger words and them sleeping around hypnotized