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When a Woman's Fed Up Ch. 04

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by Decadentdessert11/04/13

This could have gone so many ways, but in the end Deshaun received his comeuppance. In some of your passage it appeared that Deshaun was trying to find his way...hmm, we will never know. I wish that you would have elaborated more on the FBI detective and Chase, something not quite kosher there, but you brushed it aside. Overall I enjoyed the story, it felt a bit rushed. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

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by BunnyL11/04/13

5!!!!!!!!!

I can't express how much I loved this story!!! So many emotions were brought to me. I cried of sadness, fear, happiness, lust and everything in between. You are a wonderful author and this story is a 10! Great job!!

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by BunnyL11/04/13

PS

Go away Veronika, no one wants your nasty pictures. This is not the place for that, and I hope to God no one is stupid enough to send you money in the mail.
Again, great job IR2R!

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by ariesgirl11/04/13

Loved it. I was hoping Deshaun would've come to his senses at the end so he didn't have to die but he needed to be put out of his misery.

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by fluer11/04/13

Wonderful

So darn cute!!! Dylan and Keisha rock!!!

My only regret is that Deshaun did not suffer enough. Even in the end it was all about him. A gun shot was too quick. It would have been nice if Dylan could of taken a hatchet and torn Deshaun piece by piece.

And the kids are adorable.

I love the happy ending.

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by MySecretSide11/04/13

Nice

Iread I wish you had extended the demise of Deshaun and let him devolve completely into insanity. But he died, so that's something. I'm glad things worked out, loved the kids. Please keep writing.

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by HateIt11/04/13

Man, he had to go

Loved Deshaun,

He was nuts, and I enjoyed peaking into his crazy thoughts. Please write more. Create another dastardly villain we can love to hate.

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Yes Deshaun is dead!!

However Deshaun's death didn't involve pain and torture. Keisha and Dylan got married and added a little boy to their family. So precious, glad to see the growth in Keisha. Excellent writing!

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by donalde11/05/13

great ending to

your story very much enjoyed the story

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by Iread2relax11/05/13

Thank you

Thank you everyone who read this series. I truly appreciate it. I am extremely grateful that you have stayed with me through my attempts at writing, mistakes and all. You inspire me and make me want to be better. I'm not sure whether this story is done, or if another story will be born, but I'll let you know.

Keep checking my page for future updates.

You all are the best.

Iread2relax

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by mimi18611/21/13

loved it!

I loved it though i do wish things were a bit slower and evolved slower but i loved it none the less!!! great job

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by KittyOh4807/05/14

You are blessed with a gift only few have!

This story was so true....When a woman's Fed up, there is NO talking, begging, promising...NOTHING to make her change her mind, and that is where Keisha found herself...FED UP!!! Your series was one of the greatest and I love your character development. Others can take lessons. You deserve more than 5 stars! I am now a fan!

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by Anonymous08/02/14

Loved it...

I had read this story a while back and could not remember the name of it, I had been looking up other author's 'favorites' to see if I recognized the name Katrina, or a plot the read the same as this story. I finally when to see it Lit had a search bar where I could look up stories. They did! So when I could not find any story's with the them under Katrina, I checked for Keisha. BINGO!!! I came across When a Woman's Fed Up. I clicked on the story, but thought, maybe this isn't it, but as I saw Keisha's name and then Dylan the officer I knew I finally found it after weeks. This story was so, so good. Please write another!

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