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by Anonymous

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by carlieplum11/14/13

Great story! It's hard to set up alternate worlds quickly, but you make it look like a piece of cake. 5*

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by walkerlong11/25/13

original

A creative and original concept!

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by Anonymous12/03/13

winter?

this was an okay story, but its theme has nothing to do with winter. as a winter contest submission it pretty much disqualifies. as a favour i won't vote, rather than give a low score.

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I have to agree

That it's both a great story but also not quite one that fits the theme.
Drat!
With a little tweaking you could easily establish this in the North Pole as one of Santa's newest endeavors ... fertility treatments.
"All I want for Christmas is some genetically perfect sperm" - lol
Great job, the story was fun and sexy.

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by patientlee12/09/13

I just wish the cold played more of a role in the process.

It was interesting and fun though!

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