All Comments on 'Limbo of the Beasts'

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
when you are on

you're on...

you're on

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LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years ago

Wisps on the wind of life. Is time now, is all time at once, is time an illusion? Do we exist in parallel universes where moments cross but never touch?

buried_aliveburied_aliveover 10 years ago
amazing!

This poem is so visual. I can't suggest any improvements . I only wanted to say I love it and job well done. The first poem on my favorites list! !!!!!!5!!!!!!!!

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