by wws_wws
This looks like a great story! I love the detail and mysteriousness of it. Can't wait to see where it's going!
A well written story with much promise foresooth
Pray continue good sir
A splendid start. Looks to be a barn burning bodice ripper.
Now, who's duplicity and of what nature is it?
Ooh I just love a good bodice ripper! Fantastic start, can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks.
Excellent beginning with a promise of mystery.Good character sketches and dialogue too.
Love the characters and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
I am entranced by your characters and cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the writing:)
and the chemistry between them is already sizzling hot! Can't wait to read more.
Believe you have successfully captured this reader and others with your story creation and your appealing characters. Very absorbing writer. I would offer that some editing is needed. The story is so interesting that the mistakes though distracting are gladly read over, but still worthwhile correcting. Must note that am surprised that the last comments were a year and a half ago on this gem. Am on to the next chapter.
This writer is terribly good and this story IS amazing.
My warning is to NOT continue reading this series because the writer left this story hanging. I am NOT criticizing the writer, as it is THEIR prerogative if, what, or how they procede. In my case, I really enjoyed the story before I realized it wasnt completed. And likely never will be.
You stated that the story is unfinished, however, if you go to wws_wws’ profile you would find the following update “Update: 6/4/2018. I've resubmitted the final chapter. On the off chance it is rejected again, I shall find another means to get this story to you all. AS always, thanks for your patience.”
The last part of the story is titled Duplicity - Final. It was posted on June 6/2018.
Btw I’m not the author. I just thought I’d let you know where to find the conclusion so you’re not left hanging.