All Comments on 'White Sluts' Club: Innocent Lawyer'

trash is trash

Could this possibly be more racist and sexist? Doubtful.

I hope there will be a part 2.

Beyond the racial stuff, this was simply poorly done. Terrible premise, badly executed. Dialogue written by a 10 year old. No where near as good as some of your previous stories. Don't know where your head was when you wrote this mess, but it wasn't a good place. This was just god awful and is not worth the read.

As a gay man I should not have enjoyed this story as much as I did. Well written and very erotic.

I hope you continue the story -- to include the mother and the daughters alone and together.

BTW: Ignore those who don't know the difference between fantasy and reality.

how is one woman's fantasy racist

I thought it was hot and definitely written well regardless of you hate the plot and Thebes. ..

if you hate the theme. m. which is obvious in the preface and title, don't read it

Loved this story. Please write part two with mother and daughter getting together.

It is a story after all. It is a fantasy of the mind of a person. I thought it was good. A bit long, but good none the less. If I was a woman I know I would think what it would be like to have a cock of the proportions described poking my puss. Would not have to be BBC, just big. Lets hear more. As one commenter said let the mom and daughter get together, with or without any BBC.

Can't believe that some read 4 pages of it to tell you it was rotten.

It was an all right read for me but with 1 thing I had trouble accepting: the use of the "n" word. Interracial sex does not cause problems in real life or fantasies, either. I just think in this day and age, even in fantasy writings, the "n" word does not belong. That said I was turned on while reading about Mikaela's submission to BBC and Samantha making her a lesbian submissive to her. Since there was an epilog I assume this is the end of the story. OK by me. If there were to be a sequel do NOT include the daughters unless they have been turned out in college to BBC. A lesbian seduction by Samantha & mother would excite me if it is done while the grandmother also is made to be submissively lesbian. 4 stars!!

I don't mind the theme but I like my submissions to be more gradual. High powered lawyer to arse to mouth slut in a couple of hours? As I got further into the story it seemed more like a parody and it didn't work for me. 2*

Despite it being pure fantasy, it was a fucking awesome story - one of my all time favourite themes, white sluts being hard fucked by endless big black cock.

I would have welcomed learning more about her mother's involvement though

One word is enough "RUBISH"

I ENJOYED YOUR STORY BUT INSTEAD OF THE EPILOGE I WOULD HAVE

ADDED ANOTHER CHAPTER OF HER SEXUAL ADVENTURES

we loved it , one of the best we have read

and my wife is a slut for black cock and has been

for years and we both luv it

i love to help her with blk cocks

I would love if you could write the storie about denise the hottest black owned school teacher.Denise teaches at an all boys black high school .Her students call her DENISETHEPIECE, she gods gift to all young black niggers.MISS.WASKO is26 years old 5'4'' 107lbs. 44dd's big hard white titts. Denise dresses to make all black cocks hard an cum, all dresses are at least 10'' above the top of her knees. an she swings her tight ass when she walk around groups of rough angry niggers.Her black master L.T. let his 15 year old son own her for his 4 years of high school. One time he took Denise to the puplic swimming pool dressed in a thong bwiki there must of been 40 young niggers ages 11 thru 18 that had raging hard ons an 10 niggers took her to the mens room an gangfucked there hot white teacher hard.Denise took 10 loads of BLACK CUM on her white whore face. Denise lives for BLACK CUM on her face. PLEASE WHITE IT FOR ME

The story was really good. It was fun and sexy. What really made it especially hot was when the Judge revealed the names of the other women in the club. The final twist was also a delight.

Wonderful fantasy.

oh my so hot ,i loved it so much, just like all the other wives on here

i wish i could go the PIT in another town where i am not know

i have to be so very discreet

sounds such fun to get all the ha nigger cock u can take and more

i am just like her in many ways never ever thought i would be getting

bbc now like i am

more more more

I'm sure that most people who read the story were not offended. It's a fact that during sex and role playing people say and do things that bear no resemblance to reality. This story had humor, down and dirty interracial and lesbianism and was a fun read. One just had to ignore that it was totally unrealistic. Come on, I've spent enough time in courtrooms to know that under the bench cocksucking was pure fantasy, but lusty imagery!

The writer says right from the start that if you don't like hardcore I/R don't read it!

BTW, as a participant in I/R I can testify that some of the language is exactly like what you read in this story even though afterwards we go back to being "normal". Sometimes attitude spices up the experience.

if only this could happen :)

The NFL is in trouble now because the use of the 'N' word is common in their closed lockerooms. This shows a subculture of African Americans & associates that feel empowered by and with ownership of their ancestry - good and bad, distant and long ago. Not saying I agree - but it is current events.

I felt the story was a little rushed - not fleshed out that is. Needed a little more length (depth of characters), and one more edit. These are substantial people - explore them a little. And rather than the plot of 'adjusting the legal system', I would've kept it at overworked/stressed people finding a sexual release. It would have been appropriate for a clear delineation between the club and work. The conflict with Matt should've boiled to the point that the Judge had to step in to mark clear line between a sexually submissive & racist club and the workplace. After all, you did breach the subject of seniority...Dancing that line would've been better, IMHO.

Another night at the Pit for the gangbang would've made the perfect 3rd act. It might also be nice to see these people interact in a courtroom and see how the power dynamics work out now in the light of a new day and a new member of the club. And, if you do add more chapters (PLEASE!!!), consider pregnant sex with the black dudes. Be interesting for you to describe how during her orgasm her breasts involuntarily express white milk onto the black skin of the men fucking her. And also maybe some black ladies for that lesbian angle. In hindsight, the lesbian aspects were weak here. I think the Judge should've ordered Samantha to lick the cum off her face and then kiss her, swapping the semen. That would've been great. Aside from that, the whole lesbian thing wasn't developed enough. Try harder :-)

It goes in my 'Classics' folder. Well done.

Poor imagination.

1. Once you go black, you never go back. Really, any normal white man will not suffer a similar pig and the idiot near to itself, the road back to these women already is not present. What for so to humiliate women?

2 What for so to humiliate the black? To do of them boastful niggers and the stupid smelly monkeys, shaking by poor genitals at every turn? Basically they after all normal people with normal genitals. Of glamour fairy tales had heard plenty?

Excuse, read up up to the end could not. Boringly. Not a sensuality and not a pornography, it is similar to a skat. And to write you be not able

1. I loved your story as I do most of your brilliant writings

2. This is for the guy who wrote a yoga like hate comment. She warmed you in the begging if you don't like interacial stories then don't read it. Also dont leave comments that just say this was bad. Tell the writer why and how they could have written a better piece

I envy her ,I also am a white slut for black cocks,

I would love more about the club,my black lovers love using a pregnant white bitch,especially when she is carrying black babies,

tell us more of her adventures!!

Another wonderful story. Please keep these white slut for black Masters and Mistress stories coming.

please write more about this special club. would love to see more white sluts at the pit and at the club. even more about these 3 sluts.

mmmm dreaming of black cock

kisses bobbi

Love your dialogue from this white slut black cock lover, love the idea of a group of black men impregnating a white woman. Great writing, keep the stories coming!

How long would it be before her mother and daughters performed together in the Pit.....

We understand that the writer has a dynamic mind and probably a similar cunt and all

we can hope is the she has experienced some of the wonderful LUST and Pleasure

Thank you for sharing

Terrific story. Couldn't stop reading. Great dialogue. Just a Great story.

Best read on this site so far for this white girl. Fabulous dialogue and just the right amount of details.

really great story would love to read more stories of the white sluts club and of the mothers submission to her daughter and Samantha

Great read, would love to see a sequel about her daughters Mandi and Heather finding out and getting in the lifestyle. Maybe a big orgy scene of Mikaela, the daughters, Samantha and Candace?

The "innocent" lawyer quickly lost her innocence. I agree that a follow-up with the mom and two daughters involved would be a great story of how quickly prim and proper "ladies" can become what they are meant to be - one big happy family of BLACK COCK SLUTS.

Keep writing

This story may sound farfetched to those who have never been heavily involved in the white wife/Black Men scene, but there was nothing in it that i have not done or nothing that many other white wives i know have done. Its a new world out there. Keep writing!

Great story, I loved the submission to big black cock!

Sexy Redhead

This was a really good story. I loved the ending with her wanting to be bred black and ended up pregnant.

Usual racist crap from this author.

Must be black male trying to convert some more white trailer trash.

I remember the first time I took a black cock. It wasnt as wonderful as this story but it certainly hooked me. I have a black husband and believe me his black cock is the center of my being

The story was interesting and the imagery superb. I throughly enjoyed the twists and turns the story took. Very erotic.

One of THE best ever!

People have been watching too much bad porn. This mandatory ass-to-mouth stuff isn't only utterly disgusting but dangerous.

Two intelligent white women going to college on scholarships. Presume they go to same college and presume one of the black lawyers and judge has a daughter going to same college as them. their mother seduced as bbc slut and submissive to Cassandra. they do not live far away from each other., Daughter is asked to look them up and tries to make friends with them only to be rebuffed. their mother has girls over for weekend and tells them they are invited to dinner party of a good friend without identifying them pro se. They go and girls are surprised and pissed off to see their rebuffed black friend greeting them with smiles a mile wide. Dinner served and business discussed freely before talk shifts over to the girls and the daughter's hypocritical posturing of being good friends with the girls who return the same hypocritical posturing. The party breaks up and the daughter invites them to see her sumptuous bedroom with expensive clothing which she uses to encourage a good dialogue about fashion to break the ice. Chilled drinks served from her small Subzero fridge and they drink to cement a friendship plus start undressing and trying on the sexy clothes. while Mom gets seduced by the black men and wife. Later girls brought down to sumptuous office dressed in expensive sexy clothes to witness in shock their mom being seduced by the blacks like a slut. Mom asked for either of the girls to serve her and the daughter extracts sweet revenge on Mandi by forcibly kissing her while Heather is gently pressed down to lick mom splayed open. Mandi becomes submissive to the daughter and Heather serves the black men and women before both reverse roles. This introduction to bbc love leads to changes in their lives including withdrawing from college and serving to the daughter as their mistress by suppressing all intellectual thought with the exception of getting all A's for the daughter on her college courses under pain of a severe spanking for a lower grade and serving black men and women at the Pit like mom does with Cassandra. This story could go places!

I still enjoy most of your stories, especially the ones that have women or men learning that they are submissive. As always your stories are well written, and are very erotic. I am a male and have a tendency to be submissive. My wife and I have been into wife swapping back in the 60s thru the mid 80s. My wife is less submissive than I am, but I enjoyed it when she used to pick up men that used to dance with her. We usually brought one home and she would let her down. That was before the AIDs became so common. Thank you for another wonderful story.

I love the idea of the black judge being sucked off by the white lawyer under the desk while the court is in session. More please.

HOT stoker story although the women's libbers might not think so.

I gave it a rating of 5,though 10 or 11 might have been more appropriate!

Would love this story to continue!

One of the hottest!

My name is Samantha and this story had me fantasizing it was me taking in the big dick. thanx

Loved how quickly she submitted and that she was so ready to be breeding slut

Love to read about her and her Mum as well as her gangbang

To bad she did get her ex to become sissy cock slut

I would love to hear about the stuck up mother being turned into a submissive lesbian. Great story.

I am as addicted as Mikaela, Samantha and Candice!!!

I wish I was her client and her clean up man would like a follow up on how she got her daughter's into the club

This is arguably one of the best stories on literotica. Have come back to read it so many times. Pls more content like this, hopefully a part 2 for this one.

The dialogues were awesome.

I'd love to see a prequel of this. Focusing on Samantha and Candace's first trip to the pit and some of their adventures afterwards. Love your writing. Please do more "the pit" stories.

WOW, well done! Always impressed with your writing.

Makws the ending a little challenging.

I loved this story. Well written.

I love this story! I know it's from 2014, but I would love to read a sequel. Or am I missing it in your story list?

It’s still a good story! Great job and adding the names of other women was a great distraction not only for the reader but for Ms. Crutcher 😁

I loved it I wold like to here hosbens taking dick like that

I've been heavily involved with BBC since college when I did a GB with 7 and seriously dated a several others. The story is not at all that difficult to believe in real life as I have probably lived the situation as told except for conceiving babies. Group fucks, passed from one to another, FF play, following their commands and wims become part of everyday BBC worship and i live it! P

I’m a queen of spades

This is hot

Omg Jasmine, I just love your mind and your writing style

Love you honey xx

Carmella xx

Omg Jasmine, I just love your mind and your writing style

Love you honey xx

Carmella xx

As with everything you write, this story amazes me in the most pleasurable sense. Thank you.

626. I noticed that I previously read the story, probably a year ago, but failed to comment. I really enjoy the turning from an innocent woman into aslut overnight, improbable as it is. This story has the potential for a mul episode series with so many people involved. I hope you don’t forget to return to it.

It is thanks to authors like you, that women like me who have never met a black man never mind had sex with one, get my relief dreaming that i am in one of your stories, like this one. Ignore those that are offended, I get really annoyed they would spoil the pleasure of those of us that need your stories. Please keep writing.

Another classic interracial piece from the inimitable silkstockingslover!! CLAP!...CLAP!...CLAP!

Obviously BS