by gupiao
a boring bunch of crap. I can not believe it took 2 weeks for you to write this crap. Better get to it or the next chapter will not be out till Thanksgiving.
short, straight and to the point is needed. Sometimes long, and exquisitely drawn out is needed. Depends on the mood.
While obviously I'd like a new chapter every day, I actually love the pace. Prolonged denial is a wonderful thing, it makes anticipation build and the tension becomes an aphrodisiac....that way the end result is amazing. The same thing is true for this story...keep writing, keep your pace, and keep it coming. This story has become a guilty pleasure, and if a new chapter came out every few days it would lose it's fun
It amazes me people have complaints on free erotic stories.... Anyways I still love the premise and the development speed. Hope to keep reading thus great series. Thanks again!
j
Thank you so much for these! I look forward to every chapter, you've set up an excellent and erotic space to write in :).
Good story. Now Im waiting for more;). My fav chapter is ch.8 at the moment.
Masterfuljim is correct ; indeed it is the only question worth asking !
A chapter on this subject , featuring only the females , would have added immensely to the story .
It seems some of the 9 do not want him there.