All Comments on 'WVC Ch. 15: The Cxld Art Class'

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camperguy123camperguy123over 9 years ago
This story has turned into

a boring bunch of crap. I can not believe it took 2 weeks for you to write this crap. Better get to it or the next chapter will not be out till Thanksgiving.

bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago
Sometimes

short, straight and to the point is needed. Sometimes long, and exquisitely drawn out is needed. Depends on the mood.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
The pace is perfect

While obviously I'd like a new chapter every day, I actually love the pace. Prolonged denial is a wonderful thing, it makes anticipation build and the tension becomes an aphrodisiac....that way the end result is amazing. The same thing is true for this story...keep writing, keep your pace, and keep it coming. This story has become a guilty pleasure, and if a new chapter came out every few days it would lose it's fun

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Still a great read!

It amazes me people have complaints on free erotic stories.... Anyways I still love the premise and the development speed. Hope to keep reading thus great series. Thanks again!

j

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 9 years ago
One question he needed to ask

Why him in an all female group ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Thank you so much for these! I look forward to every chapter, you've set up an excellent and erotic space to write in :).

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good story

5 stars and favorited :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice

Good story. Now Im waiting for more;). My fav chapter is ch.8 at the moment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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I meant ch9* Sorry for double post

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Why him ? ......

Masterfuljim is correct ; indeed it is the only question worth asking !

A chapter on this subject , featuring only the females , would have added immensely to the story .

It seems some of the 9 do not want him there.

Anonymous
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