All Comments on 'you are My...An Ode to a submissive'

But this poem does'nt work for me aesthetically : BDSM ically it will do .

Keeping it real

explaining the deal

making your mark

bringing light from the dark

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

@Ashesh9: Sorry the poem didn't do it for you. Aesthetics as with beauty is all in the eye of the beholder. I'll try harder to meet your needs next time. Thanks for reading my postings and for your comments.

@TwisterOliver: Thank you for your poem. I enjoyed it. Short, sweet, and to the point. I appreciate your taking the time to comment.

The submissive's role is perfectly explained, none sharper than:

'I am your Pleasure

you are my Control measure'

Well done.

I like seeing both sides, submissive and dominant, in tube same poem. A most enjoyable poem, I especially like " I am your pushed edge, you are my promised pledge'. Excellent x

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The give and take, reception and offering of your words have captured the moment of acceptance of each of those roles.

xx Matt