All Comments on 'Whoa! It's Still Happening'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Interesting way to get laid......

.....but not a very exciting story.....yet.

It would be good to flesh out the characters a little more as people. Right now, they mostly seem to be just images on a screen. We don't know much about them, their hopes, fears, likes, dislikes. College fembots isn't very interesting......hot, willing college coeds, especially if we discover their excitment for our hero has some foundation in their own psyche, their own desires, hopes, aspirations, etc.

Also, what if he can indulge in upsizing boobs on some stone foxes with flat chests?

GoesGruntGoesGruntover 9 years ago
Needs Something

The main character comes off as an asshat. His disregard for others, demonstrated by telling them how to feel instead of using his ability to find people who actually might be interested in him, makes me wonder when someone is going to blow his brains out so the story at least has a little justice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Next part fast

Post the next part fast please I can't stroke to invest anymore

subkfsubkfover 6 years ago
New path

Nice to read a story where it's just wham bam. The guy made the experience pleasurable for both of them.

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