by SSX1988
I totally felt the werewolf's and her pain. You did an awesome job with your mental descriptions. Too bad he didn't have a brother with whom she could raise the pups...
nice job exploring the feelings of both the werewolf and the girl.I was sad that the werewolf had to die at the end.
Really awesome and descriptive, please make this into a series :)
I would love to see more of this story, and maybe something a bit darker.
A great werewolf story and a very, very enjoyable read. Werewolf stories are my favorite type followed by vampire/succubus. You are an excellent writer who knows how to tell a story with an excellent plot and excellent character development. I really hope you do not plan on ending the story here. Please continue the story during the 9 months of her pregnancy and how she deals with what she has become. How it affects her life with others, with her family, and with the boy she wanted as a boyfriend. It would not do this story justice if you end it here and not continue on with the story. I gave you 5-STARS for a great story but if you do not continue the story I will change it to1-STAR because did not continue the story. Retired Army