All Comments on 'Surrender to the Beast'

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Tallygirl1Tallygirl1over 9 years ago
I realy liked this story

I totally felt the werewolf's and her pain. You did an awesome job with your mental descriptions. Too bad he didn't have a brother with whom she could raise the pups...

EyetiegalEyetiegalover 9 years ago
Great story!

nice job exploring the feelings of both the werewolf and the girl.I was sad that the werewolf had to die at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great start

Really awesome and descriptive, please make this into a series :)

DarkShadowStarDarkShadowStarover 9 years ago
Loved it

I would love to see more of this story, and maybe something a bit darker.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
"Surrender to the Beast"

A great werewolf story and a very, very enjoyable read. Werewolf stories are my favorite type followed by vampire/succubus. You are an excellent writer who knows how to tell a story with an excellent plot and excellent character development. I really hope you do not plan on ending the story here. Please continue the story during the 9 months of her pregnancy and how she deals with what she has become. How it affects her life with others, with her family, and with the boy she wanted as a boyfriend. It would not do this story justice if you end it here and not continue on with the story. I gave you 5-STARS for a great story but if you do not continue the story I will change it to1-STAR because did not continue the story. Retired Army

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