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Peak

Mountains have peaks.
Tom does peeking.

re:anonymous-interesting.........

Nothing has been disabled. Report story link works fine. Are you sure you know what the hell you're doing? Good luck reporting stories that you think shouldn't belong here. This site makes that determination, not you. Don't like it, nobody is forcing you to read them. The battle of categories has been going on in this category for years, what makes you think you're going to change anything? Good luck with that.

Rose

All said and done 'Rose' like "cock" of different shape & size, variable age including daughter's boy-friend or a rich client , alpha-male to submissive pussy -liker, male or female.
A alpha-female fully enjoy sex and give pleasure to partner

Awful!

Seems to be an outline for a story more than story.

Huh!

This Story Should Be catapulted of the side of a Billionaire's Yacht...."Clay Pigeons" .....With 4 Or 5 People with Shot Guns on the ready!...PULL......BOOM......CRACK.....SPLASH...Jo lly Good Shooting Sir? ★ WOOF!

Not exactly to my liking, but......

I turn off to present-tense stories as if they're happening while you're writing. Doesn't work for me...and perhaps not for a majority of readers based on the few comments that I've read. Fantasy is the same thing....something that hasn't happened, but what you wish to happen. Doesn't work for me. Stories where all of the characters are in third person sometimes get my attention, but rarely. I get more interested in a story if it appears that the writer actually experienced the events. It could be purely fictional, but make me believe it, and I'll read it. Oh, and be sure to write well, too. I get distracted by spelling errors, and by poor use of punctuation and syntax. 3*s...decent eroticism, but not in a format that I like to read. If you wish to understand my comments, refer to your 'A Day at the River With Friends'. That's what I like to read.

Sorry ... Don’t Do This Very Often

After reading several paragraphs, I abandoned this story. Hubby (and maybe Sweetie) were just TOO clumsy. Wait years without getting professional help? Hubby sees a physician (the MOST likely AND least invasive check!) without involving Sweetie? Then he can’t tell Sweetie and letsthe marriage start to crumble ... shit, if you are NOT good enough for her, set her free ... divorce, suicide or rin away! Cannot continue reading about stupid people doing stupider things!

2* Coulda abstained, but that would not reflect the poor thoipught process in writing about an insecure loser.

Repeat comment from Ch. 1 regarding Chs. 1 and 2....

I also posted this comment at the end of Chapter 1, so most of this is repeated, and one sentence has been changed. This is what I have yearned to see....a good balance in the comments....some about the technical aspects of the story and the writing, and some about how erotic the story is. The lack of moral criticism from anonymous trolls is refreshing. Is there a new way for writers to filter these out? If so, I'd sure like to know about it. This, and your sequel piece, are good stories. Yes, some technical wrinkles, but the story line captured and held my attention. I like 'first time' experiences, and especially those that are happenstance. I'm sure that this is a fictional account, but now that the main character, his wife, and the other couple have crossed that line into this new sexual territory, I can only look forward to further installments. I'm hoping that they will chronicle how two very close couples explore new 'first-time' boundaries together. It wouldn't hurt at all to add more graphic details of the actual sexual couplings. I believe that readers tend to like that. At least, I know that I do. Paint a good picture for me in my imagination, won't you? Good job, Honeymaker. And thanks for your contributions.

Good balance

This is what I have yearned to see....a good balance in the comments....some about the technical aspects of the story and the writing, and some about how erotic the story is. The lack of moral criticism from anonymous trolls is refreshing. Is there a new way for writers to filter these out? If so, I'd sure like to know about it. This, and your sequel piece, are good stories. Yes, some technical wrinkles, but the story line captured and held my attention. I like 'first time' experiences, and especially those that are happenstance. I don't know if this is a fictional account or factual one, but, now that you, your wife, and the other couple have crossed that line into this new sexual territory, I can only look forward to further installments. I'm hoping that they will chronicle how two very close couples explore new boundaries together. It wouldn't hurt at all to add more graphic details of the actual sexual coupling. I believe that readers tend to like that. At least, I know that I do. Paint a good picture for me in my imagination, won't you? Good job, Honeymaker. And thanks for your contributions.

Re: Interesting if they come back in 10 years

I know you tried, c24j... but that's one piss-poor follow-up.
Sorry, but, next time, try harder or don't try at all.

That really couldnt have been more boring

but if indeed you are relating facts, job well done.

Fucking pathetic. Husband works hard to provide for stay at home wife. She decides to cheat with the neighbor, a black guy for her jollies and then openly flaunts it in her husbands face. No respect. Divorce the bitch.

Cunt!

Done deal! The cheating cunt needs to remain dumped!

Story will not be completed

If memory serves, the author of this story was killed in an auto accident, several years ago, in Argentina.

How?

Did this story and so many of this authors stories get above 3.5
I thought the BTB crowd would bash this into a 1.

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