All Comments on 'A Young Wife Becomes An Escort Pt. 01'

Pretty sure that one poor picture doesn't an illustrated story make.

One comment I have received so far suggests that a single picture doesn't constitute an illustrated story. I couldn't agree more, but since I wrote and took pictures for the two "Claudia's Dangerous Game" stories, Literotica have changed their guidelines for publication, and I can no longer include multiple pictures within the text of a full story - at least not in a way that Literotica will publish (I've had 6 attempts rejected). So for the meantime I'm putting out single pictures with brief accompanying texts, one at a time, and running the full word version separately in "Loving Wives". Please feel free to look at both alongside each other - hopefully it will then make more sense. Windstorm.

My only concern would be the lack of certain things missing , that would tie illustration and story together; the money and dried cum on her. Just a quick observation on my part,but understandable with new guidelines.

My understanding of comics in general is that the whole story is included in the images.

Each image containing complex parts of the storyline.