by Rebeccasm
Good Comic not perfect but stil good enough for me. And now with that said the following changes could help big ass time for it's imporvment. (1= Name Change: It has nothing to do with 'Baby Sitting' (2=Word bubble: What The hell happened to the word bubbles? (3: What The Hell is going on: I wished I knew what was going on in the back story. (And Finally 4: As I have said all of this cloud be combined into one or two chapters.