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goddesskneels2Himgoddesskneels2Himover 14 years ago
this is ...

... absolutely beautiful! i love the cadence, the sparseness, the length, the texture. this poem, like the heart of a submissive, is raw and bare and vulnerable. i wish i had written it!

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