All Comments on '13th Hour'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
scared me!

Stephen King look out...hehehe

nice write (~_*)

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Chilling

Well I had to read that

half hidden behind a cushion! lol.

Dark and scary, well written,

Thanks.

~ J

Wanton VixxxenWanton Vixxxenalmost 19 years ago
Edgar Allen Poe...

would have LOVED this! The hair on the nape of My neck is standing on end as I visualize your thirteenth hour nightcreatures' hunt and feast <shudder>. Consider this a compliment from one who reads and writes horror/thrillers. You made this macabre enough for Me to listen now for those things that go bump in the night. Shhhh!!! Did you hear that???

Spooked Vixxx

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 19 years ago
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"Abandon" and now this, not what one would expect from someone calling herself Rhyme Fairy. You just gotta love it.

BD

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Bram Stoker Part II

Poe & King I'm sure are quite nice,

but a vision with Bram brings on more terror

but your words with special meaning are:

on the carcasses,

of the lonely and sad.

Ah yes - the living dead............

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Apprehension.

The number 13 deemed uplucky. This rendering gives new meaning to superstitious fear. Well Written!

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
MOON SHADOWS FOLLOW

to the 13th floor of a high-rise, TK U MLJ LV NV

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